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Comments for 'Harvest Campaign Chapter 6' |
Fleet Admiral
8:00 pm | June 24, 2004
Maybe others put a lot of MAC guns in their stories, but I research everything I write about. The Marathon- class cruiser has only 5 MAC rounds, and that is the heaviest cruiser in the human fleet. Battle cruisers, which come later, have 6. Plus, my story is set in Harvest, the first major battle with the Covenant. At that time the heavist cruiser only had 4 MAC guns.
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Wiley
11:13 am | June 18, 2004
And im goanna pretend like i never read that.
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BansheeBoy
6:34 am | June 18, 2004
Wado, your like a God around here aren't you?
Please check out my story in the next update! (Don't worry I'm not a n00b, I use the code)
It's called Guardians of the Sanctum. Thanks!
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Wado
6:07 am | June 18, 2004
I'm planning on writing another story
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Solidus Snake
5:17 am | June 18, 2004
WADO, your alive!
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Wado
5:00 am | June 18, 2004
I have returned...
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343 Salty Beans
3:39 am | June 18, 2004
I forgot to add something to my last post.
I didn't like the part where the human cruiser has 4 MACs. I dunno, it just seems like too much of a superdestroyer, something that the humans never had in the Halo novels (i think). Just a personal pref, though, and I like bitching about small things.
Yours didn't really bug me. A while back, some guy had a story about some carrier or cruiser that had 8 MACs.
343SB
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Solidus Snake
3:16 am | June 18, 2004
Lmao...But really, its very important that you use the code to make it easier for your readers to read and it makes it look better.
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Solidus Snake
8:15 pm | June 17, 2004
The Pseudocode is my lover ;)
Lol
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Wiley
12:34 pm | June 17, 2004
Alpha, you and the pseudocode need to get a room...
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Wise guy
12:14 pm | June 17, 2004
('-')
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Elliott2020
12:11 pm | June 17, 2004
Oh, I understand now. I just read 343 Salty Beans's comment. Sorry, if it matters. 0 0
Kirby......
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Elliott2020
12:09 pm | June 17, 2004
Solidus Snake, whats with you in the PSEUDOCODE.
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Solidus Snake
3:54 am | June 17, 2004
True...so:
USE THE DAMN PSEUDOCODE!
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Mainevent
4:08 pm | June 16, 2004
I don't care how regular he is, he still needs to use the code.
But at least this one was comprehensible, unlike some of them out there.
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Solidus Snake
11:49 am | June 16, 2004
Hey, this guy is an Regular, he's been here for a while, but has never used the code. But this was a okay story, and please use the code, make it easier for me to read.
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343 Salty Beans
11:35 am | June 16, 2004
In the beginning of the story, you made some minor grammatical mistakes, such as jumping tenses in the middle of one sentence. In the end, however, you tightened up a bit.
Also, I noticed you didn't use the code. For some reason, people just don't get this. So for your benefit, I am going to post it here. I'd like to believe I'm doing it because I'm a nice guy, but I'm not gonna fool myself. YOU BETTER USE THIS AFTER U READ IT, DAMMIT!
To make a block of text in italics (slanty letters), insert [i] before the block, and [/i] after it. For bold, use [b] and [/b], and for underlining, use [u] and [/u].
To insert an indent, put [indent]. Make sure you don't do this on the line above the beginning of your paragraph, or it won't show up!
To put a half-rule, or a line break across the page, insert [hr] where you want it to be. I like to put it on a line of it's own for organization's sake, but I'm not sure if this is necessary.
USE IT!
343SB
PS: trust me, if you don't use it, a lot of the regulars will get on your case. Big time.
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