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Comments for 'Liberties Bell:The Battle that changed Draco 3:Part 3'



Elitehunter676
8:56 pm | July 20, 2004
Okay, I have a problem, I'm trying to submit my 4th chapter and the, Page Cannot Be Displayed, screen comes up. What the ####?
Guardian
4:06 pm | July 20, 2004
sorry to say i didn't read it, i might have read it, if it wasn't so bunched up together. Next time even if you don't know how to use the code. Press the Enter, like once or twice before you start with another paragraph. Please, it will help you with getting better comments.

And Dave, many of us still do read and use the codes, however, Newbs, and Elitehunter 676, i'm not saying that you are one. They don't bother to read it, because they think writing on this site is just like writing in Microsoft Word, and when they figure out it doesn't work, they just give up and move on.

Again Elitehunter 676, you are no probable way in which i'm grading you a Newb, Newbie, or n00b.

You just need some proper pointers and a path to walk on, once you're set, your stories will be much better to read. and people will enjoy them aswell.
Elitehunter676
6:03 pm | July 19, 2004
I'm back! Did anyone miss me? Didn't think so. Ok prepare for chapter 4, it will be the best yet.
KilltheMonitor
6:11 am | July 17, 2004
the codes are on the story, ride a horse to death, no not your mom: your story will look alot better bro, just keep writting and practice makes perfect
Dave Luck
12:30 am | July 17, 2004
The code...

The code...

THE CODE!!!!



How come nobody reads the guidelines? Am I the only newbie who ever did?

- Dave.
Helljumper
7:39 pm | July 16, 2004
OH yea bout 40 in a platoon i would say.

ODST
Helljumper
7:35 pm | July 16, 2004
Elitehunter676
7:36 PM | July 14, 2004
Hey man, what's up. I have some questions. In my third chapter, some ODSTs are going to appear. So I need to know some things. At present my story takes place in 2537, so at this time, did the Helljumpers wear the black armour as in Halo 2, or did they have other fatigues? Also roughly estimated, how many troops are in a standard ODST platoon? I'd appreciate this, thanks out.

"Well i'm assuming that for 2537, they have similar stuff to wat the Marines in Halo the game are wearing. The New uniforms from the E3 demo are for 20-30 years after your story. As you know, they should be dropped in by HEVs as in Halo the Flood. If you haven't read that book, then get it before you write. To be really accurate with the ODST read Robert A Heinlein's Starship Troopers. (different from the movie) They got the idea of ODST from his book. For the code, when u click on the link to submit a story, there is a another link there to click that takes u to the page about the code. Remember the code is a god in itself."

ODST

Oorah!!!!!!!
Elitehunter676
6:30 pm | July 16, 2004
Hey guys, I regret to inform you(Like you'll care) That I'll be gone for a few days and won't be able to write. But as soon as I get back get ready for Chap. 4 which should be the best yet. Oh and Helljumper I need to know the answers to some questions. To see these questions check out Force Recon- A scout sniper part 2. See ya.
Elitehunter 676
5:51 pm | July 16, 2004
Wow wow wow! Where is my second chapter? This is the third. Something got screwed up bad.
Elitehunter 676
5:51 pm | July 16, 2004
Okay sorry. I found my second chapter. My bad. And Helljumper, you could you help me out with the code. I still haven't figured it out very well.
Helljumper
3:34 pm | July 16, 2004
The Captain was yellling commands too much, thats why each Marine has a COM unit in their helmets. Use the code and a few grammar mistakes.

ODST


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