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Comments for 'Chapter 1: Reveille'



MadJackal
1:48 pm | July 20, 2003
Steele is right about Delta Force. They do a lot more than hostage rescue and drug interdiction. Anyway, good story. I liked it.
Steele
12:45 pm | May 30, 2003
Delta Force is (their not really called Delta Force, at least not officially) are a bunch of kick-ass dudes, who do whatever they need to do. Including Hostage rescue, infiltration, and alot of things.

Just thought I'd point that out.
Splinter
9:57 pm | May 27, 2003
Good Job 9/10
scope
1:42 pm | May 27, 2003
Nooooo delta is hostage rescue im positive
Havok
3:02 pm | May 25, 2003
Delta Force is drug interdiction. so 500 years in the future, why cant they do insurgency ops against Covenant ships?
scope
7:55 pm | May 24, 2003
9/10 Dude MC is the best of the best and delta force is primary hostage rescue any way
Havok
1:53 pm | May 24, 2003
wow. i almost dont know what to say. excellent. i like how you pulled falstaff's name out of the Rama series. excellent description, and great prelude to the inevitable action. 9.9/10
Wiley Kimball
7:51 pm | May 22, 2003
It reminds me a bit of my story, but I like it anyway. 8/10

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Wiley Kimball
7:51 pm | May 22, 2003
It reminds me a bit of my story, but I like it anyway. 8/10

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Wiley Kimball
7:51 pm | May 22, 2003
It reminds me a bit of my story, but I like it anyway. 8/10

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