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Comments for 'The Battle of Kiris: Arrival'



Xion_003
3:12 pm | September 27, 2003
ITS VERY GOODDDDDDDDDD lol even though im ur friend it is still very good... even though i want to know more. but on a rating from 1 to 10, its a 9 for sure
DarkTemplar007
11:00 am | September 23, 2003
sorry for reapeting that last thing twice too...
Mainevent
1:03 am | September 23, 2003
That's a lot of perspective changes there son.....
DarkTemplar007
10:55 pm | September 22, 2003
if anyone has any suggestions for what i should add into part 2 please tell me
DarkTemplar007
10:55 pm | September 22, 2003
If anyone has suggestions for part two please tell me
Alpha Lance
10:48 pm | September 22, 2003
Not bad, but what is up withall of the lines going across. But hey, nice job.
Sergeant B
9:20 pm | September 22, 2003
Not bad new dude guy.
DarkTemplar007
5:42 pm | September 22, 2003
Its my first story ive ever written so sorry if its not very good
Wiley
1:01 pm | September 22, 2003
Not too shabby, 8.5/10


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