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Comments for 'Barker's Stand: Part II'



CoLd BlooDed
11:24 am | May 9, 2004
I second that, Helljumper.
CoLd BlooDed
11:24 am | May 9, 2004
I second that, Helljumper.
Dark-NiTe
1:32 am | May 9, 2004
Lol. Thanks guys. :)
Helljumper
10:44 pm | May 8, 2004
Ok i just read it, good story. YOu remind me of me. Keep it up, good describe, i think you earned yourself out of the Noobie ranking. Does anyone else second this.

ODST
Helljumper
10:39 pm | May 8, 2004
No problem Dark- nite i aim to help

ODST
TGC
12:57 am | May 8, 2004
Pretty cool scene
Dark-NiTe
10:12 pm | May 7, 2004
Im about to start a longer series soon that ive been planning for a while, if anyone cares.
CoLd BlooDed
3:59 pm | May 7, 2004
Really cool, Dark. I'm surprised that Reid would abandon his company, but I'm also surprised that you ended the series so soon.

I liked how you painted the picture of him moving through the empty streets with skyscrapers on fire, menacing over smaller buildings. Awesome image.

Keep it up, man!
The Author, Dark-NiTe
3:00 pm | May 7, 2004
I forgot to put a thanks in to Helljumper and Mainevent for those tips they gave me in the first part of this story. I appreciated that.
Nick Kang
10:33 am | May 7, 2004
Pretty good. 'Nuff said.

NK


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