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Comments for 'The Chronicle of Squad Omega: Chapter III'



Nick Kang
10:15 am | April 22, 2004
That was good readin. Spelling was a concern, yeah, and the Elite DID die just a bit too easy, but it was a good closing chapter.

NK
Snake Soid 117
12:52 pm | April 21, 2004
Good. Really liked it. Yea, the ELite seemed to die a bit easily, but what the hell, it' a story.
Pretty cool and all. I think I read the first one, but I misse dthe second. Good story again, gotta catch up.
The Author
11:54 am | April 21, 2004
Lots of spelling errors i know, sorry about that. Not my usual standard...
Hikaru-119
11:09 am | April 21, 2004
It was nice. Elites seemed to die too easilly than what they normally would(based on the actual war mode, which is Legendary), but other than that it was a good read to pass the time during second hour.
Helljumper
3:21 am | April 21, 2004
yea the spelling is my ownly complaint, good thing you caught yourself. It really took away from the story and i couldn't finnish because it was annoying. ill try again and see what happens.

ODST


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