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Comments for 'The Chronicle of Squad Omega: Chapter I' |
The Collector
9:22 am | March 21, 2004
HEHEHEHEHE LOL ya this is Hillllarious i mean 'O those poor bastard' what a way to go. Great story but like a rollercoaster it had to many high and low points. Good luck with it though.
P.S. Less narration more story and character development. ;p
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Lord Spark
6:11 pm | March 11, 2004
If they shot the warthog with a rocket launcher wouldn't that have kind of detroyed it, instead of flipping it over. Also, I couldn't help but feel like I was reading a comedy routine rather than an action story. But hey! At least it made me laugh. Keep it up.
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