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Comments for 'The Flood: A Force to be reckoned with (Part 6)'



NightBlade
4:55 pm | July 9, 2004
this sux
crashedwarthog
9:30 am | May 22, 2004
i'm still working on my next story, itz gonna be kickass, just wait for it man=D
MadJackal
3:03 am | March 30, 2004
Hurry up with your next story man! Please? I'm really looking forward to your next one!
crashedwarthog
1:56 am | January 31, 2004
oopz, damn refresh button
crashedwarthog
1:54 am | January 31, 2004
you mean battle for the Norah? yeah it is similar in the fact that the covies and humans are wanting a ship on a deserted place, but the similarities stop there and then. Believe me i've tried to stay as far away from sterfrye's plot as possible, and i think i've done pretty well. Anyways, thanks for comparing my story to sterfrye's, i appreciate it =D
crashedwarthog
1:54 am | January 31, 2004
you mean battle for the Norah? yeah it is similar in the fact that the covies and humans are wanting a ship on a deserted place, but the similarities stop there and then. Believe me i've tried to stay as far away from sterfrye's plot as possible, and i think i've done pretty well. Anyways, thanks for comparing my story to sterfrye's, i appreciate it =D
FOrunnER
2:51 am | January 29, 2004
Awsome story, this reminds me of Sterfrye's series.
CoLd BlooDed
12:58 pm | January 28, 2004
I see, well, anyways keep it up and check out my story if you can.
crashedwarthog
12:51 pm | January 28, 2004
yeah, i just wanted to create the effect that the covies needed every troop they had. (and i guess if your troops exploded into ooze your attitude might change lol) Manatee is also a good leader, and hates to see any troops die.

Anyways, thanks for the comments =)
crashedwarthog
9:53 am | January 28, 2004
good to hear it's keeping most peeps interested man, glad you enjoyed it except for the errors =) thanks to all so far for your comments
Helljumper
7:41 am | January 28, 2004
Yea this was a good one. Some minor errors but it was good. it kept me interested.

ODST

First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all

Feet first into hell
crashedwarthog
6:24 am | January 28, 2004
news to me lol

Anyways, i'm glad you liked the story man =)
MadJackal
4:54 am | January 28, 2004
Great story! I loved this one. There were a few very minor technical errors (like Fire Team 'Gamma' becase the Marines use Alpha, Bravo, and Charlie, etc. not the Greek letters, but what the hell, it doesn't matter). Other then that, you had good descriptions and the story managed to capture me and keep me chained to my chair until I was done reading it. Good job, I can't wait for the next part!
CoLd BlooDed
11:41 pm | January 27, 2004
Pretty cool. My complaint is that of Snake Solid's, they do seem a little bit compasionate of the lower classes.

But other than that it was good, you should come check out my story, "Forced Betrayal", thanks and keep it up. 7.9/10
Snake Solid 117
7:03 pm | January 27, 2004
Cool. The covenant do seem a little to compationate for the lower classes, but, it is your story. I good story at that. This is the first one that I have read (of your story), so, I am new to it. I am liking what I have read so far.


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