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Comments for 'Halo 2:CH1 FreeFall' |
Awacar
2:24 pm | November 10, 2003
Good job! Just give yourself more time, it would be great to read then.
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Myth
4:05 pm | November 9, 2003
watch your spelling and spacing, a little more detail would be good but good job though
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FOrunnER
5:19 pm | November 8, 2003
Growup, youre on your period arent you?
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$$$
5:19 pm | November 8, 2003
$$$
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Mainevent
12:20 pm | November 8, 2003
"His brother was pissed and shot his fuel rod at him."-LMAO, I love that sentence.
It's an alright story.
Nothing special, nothing bad.
Don't rush stories.
If you have to leave during the middle of writing one, then save it and come back.
Don't rush to make the next batch, make your story better.
People would much rather read a nearly perfect and well executed story than a sloppy error rattled one. Not that yours is the latter, it's in the middle.
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Growup
8:14 am | November 8, 2003
Utter waste of time, I'm fed up of seeing fan fictions like this, and even worse is the fact that people genuinely appear to have read them.
People might feel inspired by the epic game, and they can feel free to punch out such unremarkable drivel, but what shocks me is the never-ending list of people bending over backwards to try not to offend the authors!
If it's uninteresting bull, say so! That way people who can't write won't waste hours of their day on something for other people to wince and try to make kind encouragements about!
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