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Comments for 'The Green Tin Man' |
Mainevent
10:41 pm | November 16, 2003
*Agent Smith voice* "Why not indeed?"
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Walker
3:49 am | November 15, 2003
Why not "The Green Metal Man"?
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Walker
3:49 am | November 15, 2003
Or simply "The Green Man". Or the "Green Thing".
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Mainevent
11:15 pm | November 14, 2003
He called him that because "The green titanium-a armor encasing a nano-diamond subskin that itself wraps a thick body warming layer man." doesn't have the same ring. ;)
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Walker
1:48 pm | November 14, 2003
Could it be the same Traumatised Marine from Days of Yore?
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Walker
1:47 pm | November 14, 2003
I'd question if the Covenant even knew, or remembered, what tin was? They have such advanced materials, why would they remember the name of one that we stopped using about seven hundred years ago in the story? The paragraph spacing was a bit annoying, but the writing was okay. 7.89/10.
Semper Fi
-Walker
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Traumatised Marine
7:54 pm | November 13, 2003
Yeh, reasonably well written despite a lack of new lines when there is a change in speaker, and a few paragraphs might have broken it up nicely.
I've got to say though, I can't visualise a pair of elites chatting as they 'lunch,' I just don't think they are socially ept at dining and chatting. And 'The Green Tin Man,' fair enough, but these guys are religious, you've heard Grunts squealing that MC is a 'Devil' or 'Cyborg'
But 'Green Tin Man?'
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