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Comments for 'Ringworld, Part 1'



MasterCD
3:13 am | January 26, 2004
Not too bad. It's a bit brief, goes along too fast. It just jumps from one thing to the next, which makes it hard to keep up. Add more detail, could be really good. Keep trying!
Mainevent
3:26 am | January 23, 2004
There's already a story called Ringworld. By a man named Niven, and it has Louis Wu in it. Coincidence...
Alpha Lance
11:51 pm | January 22, 2004
OoooooK.... I have to agree with Hawk.
Hawk7886
10:11 pm | January 22, 2004
Have you ever played the game?


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