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Comments for 'Retaliation'



Helljumper
10:10 pm | April 10, 2004
YOu need to break the text up, that makes it hard to read. Plus it went kinda fast and was a little confusing

ODST
System Failure
2:02 pm | April 10, 2004
Good action. I still ahve to read the rest of the series. From what I've read, it's good.

9/10
Blue Jaguar
1:28 pm | April 10, 2004
i wasn't paying attention when i submitted this, this is Chapter Five.


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