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Helljumper
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Few grammar mistakes, just need to proof read. Interesting plot, even though this post was kinda shorty. Could have gone into more details though.

ODST
Black Titan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
I do ned to work on the grammar and slow down. But im not stupid.
spanish spartan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
nigger TITAN
spanish spartan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
fuck helljumper too. need i say more?
Awacar
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
????? ss, is this a dream coming true? Listen here: You don't have to say/type anything more. Ever. Sew your lips together for sure, and bend all your fingers backwards beyond the beaking point too.

BTW, good story, as Helljumper said, some grammatical errors, but that can always be fixed.
GangstaPimpDaddy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Shut the fuck up Spanish Spartan. Fore I rip you another asshole

*GangstaPimpDaddy*
spanish spartan
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
gangsta pimp..... must be a ni.... too
Awacar
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
As long as Gangsta isn't spanish spartan, he could live in happiness.
GangstaPimpDaddy
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
What did you call me Spanish Faggot? Did you call me a N!gger? I tell you what, ima email Wu, and he gon ban yo ass fo good. Biatch.


*GangstaPimpDaddy*
Dave Luck
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Gangsta Pimp Daddy, is that an accent? Wow. I could never talk with an accent.

And about S.S, I don't care who he is. If I ever get the chance, I'll charge him with sexism and discrimination, as well as hate crimes. If the courts find him guilty, anything but Capital punishment is not enough.

- Dave.


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