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Comments for 'No Way Out: Part 2' |
grylsy
10:59 am | December 14, 2003
holy flurking snit! that was 1337, better than my gay stories no one seems to notice. 10/10 good job send in next one soon!
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Jaywhit10
12:51 pm | December 13, 2003
This story keeps me going at school, very nicely done. Its a real page turner, well if it was a book. I can't wait till the next one, I love stories like this. Why does it have to be cold?, can't it be warm but nahh cold does better, enhances the feel that you are closer to death maybe. Well I can't wait for your next one, nice writing.
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witelancer
3:24 am | December 13, 2003
You know your stuff, man. It's a rare Halo fan that cross-references the Koslovics in his fics, especially one that takes place at around the same time as the Human Covenant War. Damn, I'm impressed... I would appreciate a R&R from you. Thanks.
-10/10
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Arthur Wellesly
3:06 am | December 13, 2003
Just so you all know, I will be missing the next deadline (probably).
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Arthur Wellesly
3:06 am | December 13, 2003
Just so you all know, I will be missing the next deadline (probably).
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Santa
2:44 am | December 13, 2003
good, u have potentially kid, 8.5/10
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JediKnight114
7:09 pm | December 12, 2003
wow, simply, wow, that was powerful.... you remind me of a writer i hold in high respects and have been a long time admire of. His name..... Shadow, and now you may friend have definitly earned a spot of great admiration on my list, im jealous, please coninue writing. if you can, please read Jaywhit10/JediKnight114's The ONI Chronicals and help us out, we would greatly apriciate it
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FOrunnER
12:42 pm | December 12, 2003
Great story, you did a good job of setting the atmosphere. I also loved the mystery element, keep it up. 9.8/10
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AmokTheClown
4:12 am | December 12, 2003
don't leave us hangin like that man!!! DAMMIT!!!
great story.
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Sentinel
2:30 am | December 12, 2003
Awsome story. Nothing wrong...To me anyway. I also didn't understand something, but now I can't remember. That's just how good this story is. Just keep it up!
9.9/10
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Agent Shade
8:24 pm | December 11, 2003
my fellow fan fiction readers have summed up your story basically...fantastic naturally...my interpretation was that they would torture the man some more, or just start torturing, but from the way he was described to me, i felt as if he was already tortured before, and it seemed to have failed. excellent....
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Steve Ollett
12:49 pm | December 11, 2003
Excellent, great dialogue, you really created an atmospheric scene there. Well done.
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Jamirus99
11:21 am | December 11, 2003
Well now! Very intriguing turn here! I must say I didn't see THAT coming!
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Josh Plev
10:18 am | December 11, 2003
Wicked. plain and simply wicked. This Tom guy sounds like he's been through worse shit then the Colonel could ever have offered or become. Btu wht exactly did he do? you got that question lingering in my head now...damn. oh well. WHy would he kill Tom if he came all the way to the planet just to interept him. Or did he have OTHER intentions? He reminds me of Captain Keyes' character. Not hesitant. Stubborn.
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