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Comments for 'A Marine's Cheer'



Alpha Lance
5:58 pm | October 18, 2003
Well you little boy. This kind of stuff isn't gay, you just can't appriceate good writing, You sahould had never posted her, so get lose.
Alpha Lance
11:04 am | October 18, 2003
I was going to put head. But there wounld be any left after 117 shots.
That was gay
4:05 am | October 18, 2003
Yes this was very gay. Most of the poems created suck. They don't rhyme. No matter how I say them they don't sound good. They're too blocky. And they don't flow.
That was gay
4:05 am | October 18, 2003
Yes this was very gay. Most of the poems created suck. They don't rhyme. No matter how I say them they don't sound good. They're too blocky. And they don't flow.
Mainevent
10:55 pm | October 17, 2003
It would have been better if you had put head instead of chest. That way it would have rhymed with bed.

Good anyway.
Alpha Lance
8:40 pm | October 17, 2003
What?
Javier fernadez-vina
8:18 pm | October 17, 2003
What do you have drafting, web desing?
Alpha Lance
7:55 pm | October 17, 2003
Thanks.

To UNSC 117: It took my 5 min to think of it. I was writing it in my 4th period class at the time too.

P.S. I will read your story UNSC.
Hunter_Killer
7:46 pm | October 17, 2003
Cool 10.10/10
UNSC_spec._117
1:53 pm | October 17, 2003
haha that great just out of curiousity how long did that take you to think of?? read my story its called threatened
Walker
11:29 am | October 17, 2003
Sounds like what the MC sings in his sleep... Very good, Alpha Lance.


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