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Comments for 'Battle for the Norah: Part 1'



Sterfyre36
2:45 am | May 26, 2003
What the? Ok, never EVER refresh here...
Sterfrye36
2:17 am | May 26, 2003
Shade, I myself am writing a story. I would like to interconnect them if possible and send them into Bungie Studios.
Please contact me:
Sterfrye36@yahoo.com
Sterfrye36
2:17 am | May 26, 2003
Shade, I myself am writing a story. I would like to interconnect them if possible and send them into Bungie Studios.
Please contact me:
Sterfrye36@yahoo.com
Sterfrye36
2:17 am | May 26, 2003
Shade, I myself am writing a story. I would like to interconnect them if possible and send them into Bungie Studios.
Please contact me:
Sterfrye36@yahoo.com
Agent Shade
10:14 pm | May 19, 2003
i would appreciate if people would comment about my story and not Ace's
Ace
11:06 am | May 18, 2003
ah, well...i guess mayber i COULD have looked in the manual...but....um.....im above that....*goes and reads it in manual* oh and thanks for the advertisement wiley...
Wiley Kimball
8:36 pm | May 17, 2003
It says so in the manuel Ace.
*Review his story, it deserves a review.*
Wiley Kimball
8:31 pm | May 17, 2003
Nice story, I like to know that not all the Marines suck against the Flood, like in 343GS. 8.5/10
Ace
1:17 am | May 17, 2003
whoa...how did you ever discover this, oh ye gods of useless but cool video gaming trivia?

*REVIEW MY STORY*
LordofDestruction
10:32 pm | May 16, 2003
The M808 Scorpion requires two marines to drive and gun it. Master Chief and the other spartans can do it because they have a nueral interface that they can use to link directly into the scorpion. Look closely at the top in single player, there is another hatch for a person to enter it.
Ace
2:15 am | May 14, 2003
tanks can carry six dudes in the game? geez, ive obviously never gotten a full load...hmmm...guys could just, y'know, stand on the tanks, there's extra room...oh and again: NEED FEEDBACK PEOPLE! STORY HAS NO FEEDBACK! (MY STORY THAT IS)
Agent Shade
5:49 pm | May 13, 2003
thanks Ace...but how can around 30 or so marines fit onto four Warthogs (12 marines) and two tanks (12 marines) there, only around 6 or so are running lol
Ace
1:03 am | May 13, 2003
WOOT! blood gulch baby...only a passing mention though...heh, oh well, great story so far, the CO is a little druel, making the men run after the damn hogs, but great story...keep it up...oh, and this is the part where i shamelessly advertise my story...please everyone read my series, ive got a prologue all the way through chapter 4...and NO feedback (almost none) please read and review...
Agent Shade
12:14 am | May 13, 2003
hmmm, i expected comments like these...have you read the prologue to this story? if you haven't, you should, as it clears up a lot of things that you require to know...the scans of a Longsword fighter are limited, unlike those of a cruiser or destroyer, and i also said that the environmental systems that keep Halo the way it is (like a second Earth) were all still intact after the blast...also, ThreadedAce3 has a point, the whole story of Halo is unrealistic, thank you for your comments.
ThreadedAce3
12:09 am | May 13, 2003
Hate to tell you Jamirus, but the whole story of Halo is unrealistic, and this piece of writing fits right in there with it. Other than a few punctuationsl errors, this was a great start to a series.
Jamirus99
12:02 am | May 13, 2003
A nice beginning....but had such a large piece of Halo escaped destruction, Cortana would've noticed it; it would've been scanned and she would've realized there were people alive.

Also, in the event that by some freak accident Cortana didn't, it doesn't matter. Wit the grav containment field destroyed, the atmosphere would've vented, and there would be no gravity. Sorry- but slightly unrealistic!


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