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			| Agent Shade 1:39 pm | May 30, 2004
 read all three, and i loved them. the twist with Grace was fine, the level of detail in your writing is very impressive. the code wasnt a huge problem for me. all i feel you gotta do is indent and spread out your paragraphs, simple. keep writing this, i enjoyed it immensely.
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			| carface 10:28 pm | May 26, 2004
 I liked the srory. it was put together well, but could use some embellishment. definitely cool though. oh, and im pretty sure that cloaked elites dont show up on motion.
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			| Frost Bite 4:44 pm | May 25, 2004
 Nice use of the level... by the way, I ENVY ALL WHO PlAYEd THAT DEMO... and weeping bitterly that I didn't play it...
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			| 343 Salty Beans 11:44 am | May 24, 2004
 I know about the code now. It's my first, so basically, oops. Sorry. And as for the numbers, did I not type them all out? I thought I did. Another oops.
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			| 343 Salty Beans 7:53 pm | May 23, 2004
 To answer Lostrocks question:
 No...I based it entirely on the MP demonstration video.
 
 Thanks for reading.
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			| MC's Cousin 6:45 pm | May 23, 2004
 Demo...heh heh heh...
 Anyway.  That not-using-the-code thing is beginnning to aggrivate me.  You know why? Because I am beginning to develope a headache.  Please use the code.  For the sake of us all.
 By the way, when you have numbers under ten, type them out.  It looks a lot better.
 
 Signing Off
 
 
 MCC
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			| BansheeBoy 5:13 pm | May 23, 2004
 Cool idea to use a multiplayer map for a story.
 Like LostRock though did you play the demo?
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			| LostRock 1:42 pm | May 23, 2004
 This is interesting. Keep it going.
 
 I'm curious though...did you play the multiplayer demo yourself?
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